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| K0626058 | Project Report | 0 | May 20 2009, 12:25 PM EDT by K0626058 | ||
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Thread started: May 20 2009, 12:25 PM EDT
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Hi Sir,
Don't know if you've seen my email sent yesterday regarding my report late submission. I like to know if you could please permit me to submit a new report as I rushed through it and I’m not satisfied with it. The reason for late submission is due to some person issues. I look forward to hearing from you soonest, thanks. Ayo Agoro |
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| cshutchison | Proposal feedback | 0 | Apr 2 2009, 11:09 AM EDT by cshutchison | ||
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Thread started: Apr 2 2009, 11:09 AM EDT
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You're still making some of the same errors I flagged before: "... so that the general pubilc can be attracted ..." / "the multimedia industries stimulated to make use of these resources" !!! Re-read and act on my 3 points in my initial feedback!
"make the African image collections digitally available via internet"--which collections? many are already digitally published! Make your goals clear--you focus on Yoruba and Ashante, yet speak of African in general: which is it to be? What do you mean by "culturally reliable multimedia"? what would be 'unreliable'? What do you mean by "multiple modalities"? the whole of this paragraph looks vague and spurious, and the sentence beginning "However, people different ..." makes no sense to me whatsoever! what does it mean? How will images be sourced, and under what copyright arrangement might anyone "make use of these images"? how specifically might images "help reduce inequalities"? You've copy-pasted material from Wikipedia without flagging it typographically (e.g. in quote marks or blockquoted) and, in the case of the 'Intellectual Property Issues in Cultural Heritage project' article, without any acknowledgment at all--until you acknowledge, this will look like plagiarism! Finally, you need to be absolutely clear what you take to be the parameters of an image collection--simply a resource for others? or your personal pictorial cultural history? It's not clear. All in all, this needs SUBSTANTIAL rethinking and revision. |
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| K0626058 | Re-initial feedback | 0 | Mar 23 2009, 1:24 PM EDT by K0626058 | ||
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Thread started: Mar 23 2009, 1:24 PM EDT
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Thanks chris for your feedback. I was thinking to do virtual Roman Empire base on your lecture today, but not sure of how to get right picture/images for this project. Would please let me know if this is doable or not, thanks.
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